Galaxy trotted in and saw the green grass, her coat glittered in the sun light she neighed loudly wondering if any stallion or herd could hear her neigh.As she cantered around in a circle in the grass she snorted and decided to lay down, she lied down her long tail curled, her long mane nearly touched the ground.She stared around looking mostly everywhere boredly.

(Hmm, don't be afraid to use lotsa punctuation junk. Commas are lifesavers )

A dark bay arab trotted from the horizon, the sun shining off her glossy brown coat. As the mare got closer, she slowed, her grey hooves slicing the earth. She stopped, sizing up the other mare, flicking her forelock out of her eyes and showing off a white star. "Hello." She said, shifting so she was resting a back leg. "Who are you?"

She looked at the other mare"Oh, Hello.I'm Galaxy, Galax for short"she got up carefully then backed a few feet to keep a good distance, she dipped her head at the mare in greeting.She smiled a bit, but very lightly.She took a little bite of grass then looked at the mare again.

(Haha. Thanks for the tip.)

Flint watched Starlight with loving eyes as she approached the mare. He smiled as he slowly made his way down a large hill. As he walked by Starlight he ran his muzzle along her side. "Hello lovely." He turned to the other mare with a smile, "Hello."

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She nodded once. "I'm Starlight. What's your business here?" Her voice held a lift of authority, and she stood tall, but not strained or tensed.

She dipped her head at Flint then turned to Starlight, and nickered softly"I am here to join a herd."she looked at them both her eyes shimmering a bit.

Starlight relaxed a lot as soon as Flint stood beside her. She looked over at him, and smiled. She looked back to Galax. "You'd be welcome here."

Her voice and eyes lit up"Really?!?!?"she shook a forelock out of her face revealing a eye that had a curve of what looked like a Cresent Moon.

She nodded. While Starlight often wandered off to be alone, she also was beginning to kind of enjoy having a herd. She leaned slightly on Flint, needing to rest.

She smiled happily, and started thanking her and him."Thank you, thank you thank you thank you!"she swished her tail in delight.

Flint laughed, "Of course." He grinned as Starlight leaned on him. He nuzzled her gently as he looked back up at the mare. "I am Flint by the way."

"I'm Galaxy.Galax for short."she dipped her head again, in thanking and in greeting.

"We would introduce you to everyone else, but they sometimes wander. You'll meet them eventually." She snorted softly, enjoying Flints presence beside her.

"I sometimes dilly-dally myself."she let out a soft chuckle, and nodded.

He smiled, "Well. We have time, would you like a tour?"

"Sure!"She smiled back.

*glomps rockstar* DON'T LEAVE ME WITH THESE NUTJOBS AGAIN!... No offense or anything, fuzzy.

-_-...*Takes out assault riflle and makes a loud click, then points to my head*This better rockeh? ~.~

*shrugs, clinging to Rockstars leg* doesn't really bother me... *loud clicks sound everywhere, all of Rockehs charries holding guns pointed at Fuzzy* sorry, I can't really control them :/

*Eye twitches and mouth drops to floor (The face like: Floor-->|DDDDDDDDDD:)*

Hey, preggos can drop their guns. *Raven, Vixen, Lee all drop guns grudgingly* Starlight. *Starlight finally drops bazuka*

*Hides behind RockSTar*AIIIIIE!!!

Oh caalm down.

*Runs around screaming at top of lungs like someone just said:"I'm going to kill you..."*AIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aight, gimme the sugar,